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A short informative movie. Enjoy!
not very funny, cuz the sound is off.
This makes me want to kill myself.
It is also random and pretty funny. So... I like it. Animation could have been better but that isn't really a huge problem. Story doesn't really make a lot of sense so that's good. I need to go to prison for my marshmallow murder though.
That sure was a stupid review huh?
Not a bad animation. I can tell you really worked on it. Looking forward to see how you improve. The movie however had one glaring problem to me though, the cricket ambient noise pretty much drowned out the voices when they were at the campfire, turn that one down a bit.
nice. I like The idea :) was pretty funny.
Animation was not bad.
I think the Burp in the openning wasn't necessary, It kinda messed it.
The sound was good BUT, i think the background sound was too loud for the voice sound (or the voice was too low).
Anyway I liked it, thanks for making me laugh :) (4/5)
2/5, and zero/10
You got your rating wrong. This should be Teen for language.
Aside from that, good stuff:
1) humorous, if only just
2) Animation is decent, if not terrific
3) Sound effects are good, but see below.
1) You mis-rated it.
2) Crickets are too loud. I had difficulty understanding the Mallow or the guys.
3) I've seen better artwork. Granted, I can't make something that good, but I've see a lot better.
Your biggest failings were the confusing audio and misrating the submission. Keep up the work, you've got potential.
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