Nice
i loved that the preloader was inside the tv, then it zooms out, very creative.
Other than that it was regular video.
Author Comments
--AWFUL AUDIO. IM NOT A VOICE ACTOR--
--REVIEW + RATE PLEASE--
This is a short animation where i had to design an advert for a gym, i apologise for the poor voice acting but i have no alternative that to do it myself.
Thank alot for watching.
TheUndeadNinja responds:
Thanks, and cheers for feedback.
it's oke
Well, i cant say that it's bad, but I just think that's it really boring, try to add some background song and add some more animation, not just words that pop up, this would make it a lot more interesting. I understand that you can't really make a gym advert funny, but i guess that you could at least try to do so.
I didn't really mind the voice acting, which was actually ok. So just try to add some animation and try to avoid the gaps when you don't say anything and there is only some text moving.
Just keep training on your flash skills and i'm sure that you'll make some really nice stuff cause your drawings are still rude but good
TheUndeadNinja responds:
My teacher was really strict, so everything was regulated so it was sensible.