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I love colour. It was interesting to work with a desaturated palette for most of this. See my other stuff (weird comics, story art, other flash vids) at http://wanderblue.com
Huh, it's curious how this video manages to be simultaneously suspenseful and almost lethargically depressing. It felt like I was watching a not-particularly-nice dream. Congratulations on your double talent as composer and flash artist on this.
Wow thanks so much! <3 I think you got it precisely.
Notbad on here. The music was good. A really good choice I thought there does need to be more to the flash itself. More action I would think so. Good start though
add much more content and more action
Hey thanks! I recorded the music just for this, which was fun! I agree that it was a bit boring later on hahaha. :D
A Good Start !
It was pretty cool in the beginning with the people, but my opinion is make it more active ! like huge explosions of colours or more dark things, maybe darks walls and lights and people.
Anyways Idk, not gonna tell you how to do it , just opinions, and I can see your alright at flash so I know you can make it special, check out my trippy video it was 2 years ago when I was 17.
Keep it up.
Haha thanks! I definitely have a lot to learn still. I appreciate your comments, good luck with your trip.
Ok. Cool and dark feel.
This animation was only really lacking one thing, artistic ability.
Song = great feel
concept = great
actual animation = par. Go above and beyond. This could have been way better.
Thanks for the feedback! I'm definitely still working on my artwork haha!
I personally liked this as it begins with a more solid approach but then delves into the abstract, which was well done too. The music added a haunting background to the transitions, and overall this was nicely put together.
Thanks so much, I'm still learning how to use flash, so I'm glad this turned out well in your mind.
Going back, one last time...
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