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The end feeling that I get with this submission is that it could have been good, but it just wasn't.
~ Animation ~
The animation that you had was pretty smooth, but there was also a pretty big lack of it all together. You had the whole spinning thing going on there, but that could have been a pretty easy copy and paste. It does seem to get a bit faster, but even if it did that really wouldn't be much work.
~ Graphics ~
Pretty simple, but I feel that if the submission had more content that it would have been good enough. There could have definitely been a better style used here and much neater art, but like I said it wasn't terrible.
I loved the colors that you used in the entire submission though. The colors of the background and the clouds looked pretty good.
~ Story/Content ~
This could have been good, but it's what really brought the submission downhill. For example you simply stuck to the object spinning at the end, but if you would have went with a bunch of random images and different scenes then you might have had a pretty decent music video. With what you had though there was basically nothing to watch of any interest.
The guy running into the wall and having something splatter out from his head was the most exciting part and that really wasn't much.
~ Audio ~
The audio seemed a bit loud at first. Perhaps tune it down a bit. It was almost like you wanted this submission to make someone deaf on top of making them go into seizures.
The sound effects were done rather well and were synced pretty well with the animation.
~ Overall ~
There really isn't anything to watch here that would be enjoyable to someone. Making it longer with a bunch of difference scenes would have made it enjoyable and maybe even a good music video.
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