yes yes ummmm
yes yes umm well not bad at all for a first flash. and maybe a tad to random. i think youre animation skills are great but the content just needs a little more structure.
Thank You
Author Comments
Well, nothing really to say, except its my first flash video.
I really enjoyed making it, at first i made it to expiriment flash, but then it became somthing more than that.
Side Note:
Any building critisism and tips will be more then welcome.
Hope you enjoy it =].
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I know sound at first has some glitches, my next animation will have better sound.
But i will not lose the randomness :D
AlonZA responds:
Well, There no such thing "To random".
Maybe the conect between scenes wasn't that good, but thats all my animation skills could produce at the moment.
Well, I got alot to learn, but again, its only the beginning!
yo, man
Audio of the first song was messed up a little.
AlonZA responds:
Yes, I noticed it after the upload.
Oh well, its ok, next movie i'll do much better.
...Improvment..
Seriously, this is more of a test flash. The animation is great for a first time. Thing for improovment, quiet your beggining sound, make a better story, it seemed way more epic then in the begginging then the iguana, the music, and the joke at the end werent that great, kinda ruined the mood. Im sure you can create something better with some creativity.
AlonZA responds:
Well, its my first flash(got flash 5 days ago), and i wanted to exprience some new tools on flash, and make a random inside joke.
Its just random, my next one i'll think of a bigger script.
Anyway, thanks, next movie i'll surely make longer, with better sound adjust.
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