Cool story!
Keep em' coming! =) .. I hope to see more of this in the future.. =)
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PLEASE READ: This is the first episode of Bimmy, When i first started this i dident have the tablet, what i used when i made the begining of it was my bed and a card board box for a mouse pad. When i found out about the tablet i stopped working on this and tried to get some extra money for it. Time came to pass and i had a sketch pad, Why not practice on that i say.So i did and the Bimmy you see after the text is the final version but not entirly. He will be getting new clothes and armor through out the series. Im really sorry about the poor animation in the beggining. Not only that i had to remake the beggining because i messed up really bad and deleted some things i shouldent have.
Bimmy is the yellow characters name, and i know its not mentioned in the episode. This episode is only showing how he got there in the first place..sadly theres no action, but its only a beggining to a series with a lot of it. Im going to start the 2nd episode as soon as possible. Please dont blam it. With the tablet the ending to a couple of weeks to make and the beggining took longer because of the lousy working area. But enough talking...Thanks for watching
ThyGentleman responds:
Thanks alot!
Meh
The sounds are pretty good, but the drawing is seriously lacking. Seems like it would be an anime if....well, if it was well drawn.
decent
Totally lacking music, dude. Except for the end, obviously.
It's a decent script, but it's really kinda boring with all the silence. Get some tunes, ambiance, more sound effects, and other sounds to really make this stand out :) good luck on episode 2!
ThyGentleman responds:
yeah its mainly the beggining all problems that are going to be resolved in the second part
o hai!
well i have to say, the poin where you started using the tablet was fucking incredible. Ive never seen such a drastic change in the middle of he flash and it was pretty nice surprise. Ill give you a 10 cuz there arent many other flashes like this one
Nice sword.
Wow that was a ;ot better than i thought it would be. The change from when you the tablet was very noticable and looked a hell of alot better. This has the makings of a epic series on NG. Nice place for a start.