And here is what NO.1 JUDGE Xidious scores YOU.
0.6 STARS
The audio was poor quality and it would have helped a bit to give the chars some names or something.
I couldin't really tell where the flash was going the whole time watching it.
Author Comments
its a pretty kool vid the ending does not make much sense any pointers or constructive cristisism you can give me go ahead and vote fifen
well
its better than anything i could do now xD
A+ for trying
I'll give you a 5 for trying. I can't use Flash to save my life, but at least you somewhat have a grasp on it.
Some parts of the animation were smooth while other parts, not so much. It was kind of hard to tell what was going on most of the time, and the drawings could use a lot of work. The only advice I can give is to try and spend a little more time on it. Good luck to you in the future! :)
wow seriously
work harder