Its Ok
I'm still trying to learn how to make games myself. I think this was a good start off.
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Hello people! This is my first ever flash game, I spent about 3-4 hours making it, any feedback would be welcome!
Hope you enjoy it!
Use arrows to move your character
^.^
OMG! I WON!
It was okay
I've never made a flash game before (want to) so im not sure how difficult it is. But since you're main character only has like one sprite i think you could have made it a bit more complex you know? Like just a rectangle it was ugh. I think you should put more time into it. And at the end of the level make it more rewarding than "you won.." Lol i was standing there waiting for something for awhile. But other than that it was fine.
hmmm that preety nice for a 1st!
but u need better art wirk, and maybe a jingle in the backgound, an intro movie telling us why we would jump around on clouds, well it was nice and all but it seems meaningless
Spiderbeaver responds:
Yeah, im working on a remake, i might add new levels and stuff, i will also improve graphics :-P
Not bad...
Youve got some gravity in there and nice health bar and everything and it seems like a good idea. Seeing as you didnt spend long doing it it was good for the time you spent. To improve, I would insert a simple starting screen and something to happen at the end. And perhaps make the spikes easier to see and show you were damaged? To enhance it, add some sound. Other than that very good for your first. Beats mine!