Score: 8

"Alright i guess..."

by: suirad12

date: November 23, 2009

...although i agree with Dr3wdub, the beginning was sort of a FLCL ripoff, but the voice acting was satisfactory and the animation was straight, i see good things coming from this.

Score: 10

"awesome"

by: Dimensionalmaster777

date: November 18, 2009

you should make a series of this animation it has potiental

Score: 7

"okay, seriously?"

by: Dr3wdub

date: November 16, 2009

FLCL, we have all seen it.

moving on,
Voices: meh 7.0 not the worst Ive heard
Art: alright 9.0 its good for a flash
Story: eh... 5.0 could have been done a lot better imo. not the story itself but how its done.
characters: 5.0 they both seem boring. one is a monotone alien and the other is a bored sounding teen.

Score: 7

"It's been said, but needs repeating."

by: DazedMario

date: November 16, 2009

Firstly, he opening dialog is completely stolen from FLCL; Secondly, the whole plot and story screams FLCL. Now that I've stated that...

-The voice acting was mediocre at best, sounded too raspy for a young boy if you ask me. Tho I like your choice for the music.

-The artwork was great, tho I think it could've been much smoother in the animation, the "fight" scene was too choppy to enjoy.

It was alright, wasn't a waste of time to watch. I personally love FLCL, I assume you do as well if your willing to try and do your part and take the story, twist it, and make it your own; However, needs work if I'm going to continue watching.

Score: 8

"off the topic of FLCL..."

by: Dirtylilsaki

date: November 16, 2009

that was a nice start, like the animation and couldnt tell much of the story but it was definatly an intro to something. Im just going to critisize your work.

animation 9
sound and voices 8
plot and characters 7

overall 8. good job.