So is anyone gonna point out this series sounds like the Legend of Korra?
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Sorry for the delay, but I had to a broken computer for a few months.
This Chapter of TLOK features much more drama than the previous chapters. But don't worry, the action is still there, in the chapter, you just have to wait for it. And yes, finally voice acting! Not any full dialogue, but still enough to make the animation seem less dull.
I tried to make this as original as possible this time around. Now I have some custom backgrounds and custom backgrounds to go along with my already custom sprites.
Enough of the speaking, I hope you all enjoy it!
Nice work dude. I love the story but I have a few complaints.
Please stop using the same two animation when Korah attacks
You don't need to put in voices it just feels kinda forced you know
And make a new I have waited years man come on
Great series!
Well, I'm gonna give my completely honest opinion about this series...
Your storyline/plot is flawless, and it kept me interested the whole time.
It kinda reminds me of the "Avatar" series on Nickelodeon for some reason :P
Now the animation itself...
The only thing I don't like about the sprites are Korah's action poses...they're way too...stiff and rigid. Try and add some mobility into his arms.. I've seen your other custom sprites and I know what you can do with them...
As for the DBZ Sounds...get rid of them in the next episode.
I know this was made back in 09' when the whole DBZ/Sprite Fight Crossover was in the zone...but those sounds have gone stale now, and so has that fight style...
Try to stay away from that or your series might risk getting stale too (or not, the storyline really saves it ;)
My main criticism for this episode especially is that I was kind of put off at the end. I mean you leave us on a cliffhanger (Korah about to be defeated, and the dragons attacking snow) and you end the episode with an image of two horribly drawn dragons. You've probably improved since then but still, that killed the mood of the overall movie.
Don't get me wrong, this is a great (and I mean GREAT) episode, but that last image looked awkward and rushed.
You still have a fan in me, and I love this series.
Keep up the great work!
~liljoey50~
nice work
You're getting better however there are a few flaws:
first of all you sprites (especially for Korah) snow blad was at first black and after the fight white(frozen?), korah needs quite a bit of his fighting just looks stupid(no offense), his body stays in position while his arms move around, not a lot of sprites for in the air and when he going with his blade pointed down he was all stiff.
for that I suggest giving something that wave in the wind so it looks a bit more alive.
second: choice of music and choice of words. for that tearjerker scene you used a too short loop (megaman music isn't suited for that) and the words he chose weren't inspiring if you know what mean.
and last: your drawings could use a bit shaving they weren't top notch yet.
interesting story though and i'd love to see more of it
Great
awsome dude
