Not bad
work on some better sound effects maybe.
Author Comments
This is an animation I made for a school project. It was also meant to be submitted to the "Screen it" competition, unfortunately this was never done :(.
The requirements for the competition were to make an animation within 2 minutes about cyberspace and the dangers within it.
It is a story about a boy who is taken into the world of cyberspace and sent on a journey. He encounters a few dangers once he is inside and has to find ways to defend against them. If you are interested, try and find the name "Sweet Az" on a few screens, some are pretty well hidden.
Thanks to Tom Kunz for the music, i was unable to use copy written music so he was kind enough to make a drum beat for me :)
Thanks for watching and I hope you like it.
Az.
Spam
Everybody hates spam,Why did you put a blank blue background with very few sound effects.Make an actual flash next time.
SweetAz54 responds:
I apologize for that, this is my first flash movie and my first post on New Grounds.
I didn't know that a pre-loader was needed, I got one but now the drum beat and the writing sound is off time :S.
I don't really know how to fix that but at least it's mostly working now.
Sorry again.
Az.
good
the gun animation should be more real, is not "fluid"... :(
more dynamisme is need...
sorry is my think