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This is an animation that I did for my FMP in college. It is about how some poeple have no imagination and in their free time like to go to supermarkets. Enjoy and please do leave comments.
I like the style with crude drawing, and not be quite sure of what you're watching. Also the coloring were good alot of white and the sudden red were a good contrast. But for some criticism I will have to say, try to add some more story to the flash and make more appealing.
it was ok o wate did i just saw a guy on a chek out i can't tell. well you did fine.
First I would like to suggest a loading screen and play button with replay button after credits in the end. I would also suggest some humorous music to play with it to keep the viewers attention. I do find the reality and humor with what you presented and it's the god honest truth about people. If you plan on future flash animations, I suggest more too keep the audience intrigued. Not the best but it's a start.
it was ok
loved the art style, but it needs sound or music to give it an extra feel while watching it
The drawings are pretty awesome, but I suggest adding sound to it. Maybe some ambient, or drone music?
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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