Gravity_ by danomano65



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Submitted: 10/25/2009 | 04:58AM EST

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Genre: Drama

Current Score: 4.24 / 5.00

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GRAVITY
ODE OF THE UNIVERSE: Part One.
This is an animation piece that I find means a lot to me.
I contemplated the universe and its structure of the summer and was compelled to visualize this for myself and for all of you that care to revel in it's complexity.
Later parts will involve more of my philosophy and opinions of how reality and dimensions work.
Please enjoy this short cartoon.

Music By TV on the Radio. Blind.

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Average Score: 9.1 / 10

Score: 9
NastyCheeze

"Wonderful, but..."

date: November 14, 2009

The science is inaccurate. Molecules are NOT formed by gravity holding atoms together. The atoms form bonds instead. Protons and neutrons don't hold together because of gravity either. And neither do quarks. And while gravity does play a big part in the universe, the universe does not entirely depend on gravity. You totally forgot dark energy, the almost opposite of gravity, that causes the universe to expand. And you used Bohr's model, an inaccurate portrayal of the atom. Electrons don't have a defined path in an atom. Perhaps this was part of the art style, I don't know.

However, I'm just making corrections, and I'm not really thinking about the science involved while writing this review. Other than the inaccuracy, the art style was brilliant. The animation didn't please me, but the art style was excellent and easily made up for that. The music was okay, I didn't really like the music. This made me think a lot. You taught me about quarks too!

I can't wait for a sequel!

November 20, 2009

Author's Response:

i was more referring to how gravity makes galaxies move in spirals and that is similar to the spiral of dna. i know that gravity isn't responsible for the formations of atomic structures. lol. jeez.

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Score: 10
PoaKliKluu

"Wondering..."

date: November 9, 2009

i just wonder the philosophy in this flash. Makes me wonder a lot o.o
i really loved the song and the way u make the things move around the center scene.
Curiously, And wondering. Just the way a appreciate it.
Keep up the good work (:

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Score: 9
Parasky

"Great job, but some problems"

date: November 9, 2009

Don't get me wrong, this is an excellent flash. The art style and music choices are superb, and the subject matter is fairly unique. However, you didn't seem to do a whole lot of research before making this, as gravity is not the force that holds together DNA, nucleotides, atoms, or quarks. DNA and nucleotides are held together by electromagnetism, and atoms by both electromagnetism and nuclear force (quarks I'm not so sure about). Even so, this is a really great flash. I'm giving you 8/10, but bumping to 9/10 because this flash introduced me to a new band (TV on the Radio is now one of my favorites, and you deserve a point for that). I'll definitely be awaiting the rest of this series, but as a friendly suggestion I would have to say do some research for the next one.

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Score: 10
vampire1666

"10/10"

date: November 6, 2009

Very well done, man. Good music, pretty good graphics, and an all around good animation. Keep up the good work my man.

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Score: 9
TrickyNixon

"Brain Oozy Goodness?"

date: November 3, 2009

A nice "Now you think about that" Flash. It does make you wonder. For what the flash is supposed to be i give it a 10/10 (I think you accomplished what you set out to do quite well). As an overall flash it had pretty good animation, I give it a 9/10. I would like to see this made into a series.

((PS, I really enjoyed the song selection. Could you tell me it's info?))

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