Score: 9
"Wonderful, but..."
date: November 14, 2009
The science is inaccurate. Molecules are NOT formed by gravity holding atoms together. The atoms form bonds instead. Protons and neutrons don't hold together because of gravity either. And neither do quarks. And while gravity does play a big part in the universe, the universe does not entirely depend on gravity. You totally forgot dark energy, the almost opposite of gravity, that causes the universe to expand. And you used Bohr's model, an inaccurate portrayal of the atom. Electrons don't have a defined path in an atom. Perhaps this was part of the art style, I don't know.
However, I'm just making corrections, and I'm not really thinking about the science involved while writing this review. Other than the inaccuracy, the art style was brilliant. The animation didn't please me, but the art style was excellent and easily made up for that. The music was okay, I didn't really like the music. This made me think a lot. You taught me about quarks too!
I can't wait for a sequel!
November 20, 2009
Author's Response:
i was more referring to how gravity makes galaxies move in spirals and that is similar to the spiral of dna. i know that gravity isn't responsible for the formations of atomic structures. lol. jeez.