well,well,well
i think you know who this is, anyways, overall...pretty good, i would recommend a better credits presentation for your flash, and perhaps some more content and pitch to flesh things out some more, but as a beginner, quite good.
Author Comments
YAY! I made a second attempt at flash! I'm kind of hard to get rid of aren't I? Well, this is a series that has three parts, and me and the Astrose crew are steady at work on the next two parts.
Please tell me what you think (This animation was also made using a mouse.)
XDDD
Its funny at all, but theres something missing .-.
Astrosebraxton responds:
what is it missing?
almost there
your THIS |-| close, keep it up!
Has potential.
The beginning could use some work. I couldn't really see the stick dude running around. Once you got to the main part though, it got better. Good luck with the sequels.
well
your better :D
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- Oct 16, 2009
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- Comedy - Original