teehee
it's ok. could've used better lazers though...
Author Comments
The animations were made by me and the voices were done by my friend matt. i made a bootleg of the real lazer collection because i thought that it would be cool and fun to put my own lazer ideas into an animation. im a noob at making animations, so this one took me about 14 hours to make, but it was fun. The picture of the brown gut on the plane is my friend, who gave us the terrorist idea, lol.
THIS IS MY FIRST ANIMATION, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WOULD BE NICE! THANKS FOR WATCHING!
You've had enough reviews on the 9/11 thing...
...now let's get some stuff about the actual flash.
You definitely need a pre-loader because the animation kept freezing 'cuz it had to load, and since one of the main points of the lazer collection is that it's sudden and random this kind of ruins it.
Your animation is pretty good, even the stick figures look kind of nice, a little more work and you'll be a nice artist.
Last thing, which isn't really a thing looking at it in hindsight. I also am not sure how to phrase this one semi-complicatedly either. Your female voice sucked, and I'm not sure how to tell you how to make it better either, vocals are one of the things you just need to figure out.
mikey17 responds:
lol the female voice was a male voice at high pitch. i also dont know how to use a pre-loader, but thanks for the constructive critisism
lol
great vid really funny
mikey17 responds:
thanks, i hate those pple who are being pussies about th 9/11 thing
no way
9/11 reference is not a good way to make this stuff sympathy.
ehhh
comparing this to the real thing it makes yours look like shit even though its your first animation put some time in it
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