It seems like you have a grasp on it, maybe more material in the submission itself? A soundtrack? An intro and an outro?
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
This is technically my first ever actual movie. It is very, very short but it is as I said, my first movie. Don't judge to harshly, but I know you will. If you do do so, than please make it constructive.
Thank you and have a pleasant day.
It seems like you have a grasp on it, maybe more material in the submission itself? A soundtrack? An intro and an outro?