Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
edit**((( eh that entire spam befor just let me look stupid... so lets remove it.
enjoy it flash or dont enjoy it, that is the question)))
"Edit: now hase the flash scenes select"
finaly episode 4 is done:
*bocodamondo want to earn money so he cook 'fred" and the rest is the beginn of a new fricking adventure of bocodamondo.
-thanks to jaxxy egoraptor tomamoto & eddsworld to helping me on the voices in my submission.
you can see the flash is 9MB thats why i can't make subtittles
but im sure next flash i can do it :D
about the art, (deleted)
about the audio: bad quality WAS* bad
if you like my works here more:
so that it...
with big love -bocodamondo
I dont know how cola could be food but... 5/5
Give it some more work, and it would be awesome. Only thing necessarily bad is the English. But then again, I speak Norwegian natively.
I find all of the badly scripted lines hilarious.
I'm only a (pre)teen and I've praticed animation and it was way better than this but I want my criticism to be constructive so you really need to work on the lip syching. It's just a repeat and it's choppy. The lip synching also has messed up timing. The drawings have lots of marks on them so you could improve your art. It's just your average flash. I've seen many flashes like this, it could use improvement with everything pretty much. The lip synching, the art, the animation, even the VOICE acting.
No offense... no wait, TONS of offense. I'd have to agree with Tallersman on this one. This is probably the worst animation I've ever seen. The mouth movements are just repeating two frames. The hands either look like Freds on an arm or crab claws. I've made better animations with Paint and Movie Makers. There's more text than the sucky drawings. Seriously man, it would've been GREAT if it had at least ONE bit of humor. Did you do this in an hour or something?
.......................dude...check out date..............................now STFU.
ASTEROID HURLING TOWARDS EARTH!!!
tasty crunch of yummy cookie crumble
Detective Nwar is one day away from retirement.
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.