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amimizunofan22amimizunofan22

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Boy...

That was at once both poignant and twisted. How sad it is that some kids really do end up on the streets because they lose a single parent and have no other family to stay with. I really liked how things came full circle and he began to realize, as he was about to shoot the woman, that he had become the very type of person who had deposed him of a blessed childhood. However, the revelation was too little, too late, and now he suffers death and his girlfriend suffers as a grieving, single, to-be parent. Perhaps one day she will be walking down the road with her child and an armed man will step out to confront them; it's such a vicious cycle. Interesting concept!


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kennethitchikennethitchi

Rated 5 / 5 stars

good

nice suprising end man :P



GrombieGrombie

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

For fuck sake man

I fuckin jumped at the end, I was getting all mellowed out and then BAM



LigitLigit

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Dude

Dude... that was jacked up



RomaatomRomaatom

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow!

This is awsome