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Here it is the first madness retribution! Be sure to watch closely for a plot line that leads to the second animation!Enjoy the Movie!
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your video is good its just that u copied alot from krinkles
Freakin copy cat
Make your own charecters you freakin stealer
do u even know how many people use charcters like these. go and complain on a different submission.
Good but needs visual work.
It was a good attempt but your visual elements are off that would better the perspective of a scene. One that I really noticed was the end scene with the three trucks coming towards the main character. The two on the outside looked as though they were floating in midair. Yes, it was good to have them higher up on the platform but the vehicles should have been smaller. If something is farther away naturally it would be smaller. I believe that would have really helped that scene.
Another thing that made the animation distracting is the small cut scenes with the truck. It was so slow. There was not animation going on and the small movement that did happen was choppy. In the beginning when the character jumps down into the truck, he stood their for a moment. I understand that he was driving but some sort of movement would have been a good sign that the animation did not freeze. saw this a lot through out the flash. Overall it was decent but smoother animation and better perspective elements would really bring your animations up to a new level of art.
I like it because i can't make one i have macromedia but i cant make so 10/10 5/5
hmm , look
feet animation -1
a little choppy -1
stole jebus from krinkels -1
Some characters +2
Misc placement +3
Hope that my review is a little used :F .
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