A couple major problems I should point out:

1. It was unclear what was happening
2. It is very short and loops
3. It isn't Flash, it's Pivot
4. It's a fairly bad Pivot

No offense, but this doesn't seem to be anywhere near being a qualty video. If it's a work in progress or you're familiarizing yourself with the program that's perfectly fine, just don't upload it to NG.