Score: 10
"awesome"
date: September 18, 2009
Well looks like you have come to newgrounds with a bang, congrats of your 4th place. Now onto a review.
The animation here is pretty basic, but what do you want when its a constant close up of Piccolos head? It was pretty cool how his face changed to match who was talking though. It might have been nice to have a little more happen on screen, but for a quick short like this it does fine I think.
Your voice acting has improved a lot, and that's saying something as you were great to start with. Nail, Piccolo, Kami and Kazoo all sound wonderful. There are a few moments when the voice loses it for a second, the only line the sticks to me is Piccolos' "There are only two!" where the yell loses his normal shouting inflection, but its only minor.
the script works well, and i know you improv'd the whole thing. I do feel like Kami was a little underused, though it would be hard to do any more old man jokes without repeating futurama or the Simpsons I think.
Overall a great flash and I hope not the last I will see from you on this website.
