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chao fight

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this is my first flash ever if anyone has some tips feel free to let me hear it oh yea as you can tell the sounds are not made from me

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You got the idea...

Its good for a first, but then again, I doubt this was your FIRST animation ;)

I guess you have the most basic physic understanding, and at least you know how to insert sound clips and you had a crack at lip syncing.

Tips for next time: Dont do 'to be continued'. Ever. It only shows that you lacked the effort or ideas to complete your animation. Your better off just making something happen that triggers the end of the animation.

On another note, never EVER EVEEERRRR use chipmonk voices. Use your OWN voice, or pre-recorded stuff. Dont edit it. If you are too embarrased to say something without editing it, then you can always use the text tool, but use a nice font (NOT TIMES NEW GOD DAMN ROMAN) and dont keep the text up there for too long, and DONT use speech bubbles.

Good luck, but there is so much stuff I could tell you that wouldnt fit under the 3,187 words I can have remaining in this post.

bobthemailman responds:

aight thank 4 the advice oh and i drew the letters there not text

Silly but not terrible...

I can tell you tried to mimic the style of Dragon Ball Z with characters that resemble Pokemon. All in all, it wasn't bad for a first attempt. I can honestly say my first attempt at flash was HORRIBLE. Laughably horrible. Practice more and try to be original.

bobthemailman responds:

lol yeah im still learning how the program works i got a long way to go thanks 4 watching

meh

i thought it was slightly, and i emphasize SLIGHTLY, amusing. you need more practice.... period. plus you nees to work on your sound quality, i couldnt hear the chao's over the music at times

this is crappy.

dude you call this a video,i call it a badly drawn slideshow!

bobthemailman responds:

damn harsh its the first one calm down why not give advice instead of being an ass about it

cool

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