The animation and the story were both good. However, there were some audio syncing errors, the voiceovers weren't good at all, and it wasn't very funny, (if you were aiing for it to be funny) It was good, but the animation was also sloppy and rushed and you could have done better.
Restroom Divas
August 20, 2009 –January 3, 2011
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
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Edit: To the viewers, Thank-You for your feedback, comments, and for especially viewing "Restroom Divas" (I know it's a little long, and somewhat dry, but learning's the key... and I think I learned much, to apply to future animations and beyond!). Thanks again and good health to all!
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3 Divas. One washroom. From a gossiping (cellphone using) lady, a confused and maddened mosquito, and an overjoyed fruit fly restroom lunacy prevails. Who will win? And who's the real diva?
Also, as mentioned prior the Aniboom FOX contest thingy is nearing (deadline August 31, 2009). For info., see my last post.
A few might also notice that this is actually a re-sub (and big thanks to all who commented on the last; learned much). So now (through wing/arm animation clipping), and after NG testing (I finally figured how to do it) here's a much better mouth-to-audio fit (clearer story, hopefully).
Comments, suggestions, and ratings appreciated. Enjoy!
P.S. The chef, alien, team movie is still a go, but due to "Restroom Diva" problems, I'm gonna focus on 1-2 minute movies for a while (next up a soapy horror; no insects!) :)
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...the animation was good I suppose,but sadly you're animation alone could not hold up the long,unfunny,and and simply terrible story you have created.also you're voice acting was simply awful!but you're animation was good so I'm giving you a 4.just clean up you're work and I'm sure you're next work will be at least less laughable then this one.
I really like the animations and the story is funny (as far as I understood it). I think you sped up the voices to get a higher pitch. That's a good idea, the flies sound like in television cartoons.
Sometimes it was hard to understand the flies because they talked too fast. I think you could balance the speed and pitch by speaking extreamly slowly before speeding up. But maybe I only have problems because I'm not a native speaker.
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