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My first movie. Please don't delete it. At least I made an effort.
Well, it was definitely too short, but I suppose it was the point. Apart from that, it was smooth, nice to look at, almost cute. I'm gonna protect this one.
Thank you very much!
...it's clock day!
That was just luck lol.
Well, your animation is smooth, so you get points for that.
It leaves a lot to be desired, though.
First is, add a preloader. Always add a preloader. If you don't know how to make one yourself, there's a whole bunch of them here on ng for you to use if you click the 'downloads' link under the header. There's also a number of preloader tutorials in the flash tutorials section.
Second, add sound. Sound makes everything more interesting. If you don't have it, your flash will seem a hell of a lot more boring than if you had sound.
Third, it was extremely short. Too short. Spend a while adding on parts to your flash, though I know the longing to submit your first flash. I did the same thing with my first submission.
There's potential here, though. Keep working on it.
(You're going to get a higher score on this today than you would any other day of the year because it's clock day. Most people won't even watch your flash. Bad day to submit it if you want feedback and a fair score.)
Ok, I did add a preloader buuuut it was in AS2 and I was doing a AS3 progect.
I didn't add sound because I wanted to get it in NOW.XD
I'll edit it so it's longer later.
Thank you for your awesome review.
happy clock day, i fived it.
your amazing dont worry.
Thanks for the five but seriously, vote what you think it deserves! Thanks for the kind remark though.
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