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Aug 12, 2009 | 10:58 AM EDT

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im new to flash and this is my latest flash corrective criticism please

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AmsuleAmsule

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 12, 2009

good XD

I would suggest a better sitting up bit the stickman just bolts straight up if you understand what if talking about.



Fearun9033Fearun9033

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars August 12, 2009

Nothing too new or interesting

But still good and I'd say you are on the right track.

First of all, it's Stick not stck fight. Also, add some punctuation to your description.

The art is ok, but since there are like millions of stick movies, try to find yourself a style that makes you unique, or you will just be "another one".

Could be longer.



mobbymobby

Rated 2 / 5 stars August 12, 2009

It's ok

You did a very good job on combat fluidity and with hit sounds. My suggestion would be: make it a longer sequence of blows before people gets thrown away. It will make it look much more complex and impressive.
Other suggestion that you probably know it make it longer.. I pretty sure with those two changes you could get a really good score :)



cmesupcmesup

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars August 12, 2009

Uninteresting

Stick fight are long past theyr "golden age" I gave it a 2 just because it was decently done.It has to be something really extraordinary to go above 3 or 4 like a good story , humor or really badass animation and art.



Kylo24Kylo24

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 12, 2009

longer

i loved it i think you could become great but try to make it longer ok