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im new to flash and this is my latest flash corrective criticism please
I would suggest a better sitting up bit the stickman just bolts straight up if you understand what if talking about.
Nothing too new or interesting
But still good and I'd say you are on the right track.
First of all, it's Stick not stck fight. Also, add some punctuation to your description.
The art is ok, but since there are like millions of stick movies, try to find yourself a style that makes you unique, or you will just be "another one".
Could be longer.
You did a very good job on combat fluidity and with hit sounds. My suggestion would be: make it a longer sequence of blows before people gets thrown away. It will make it look much more complex and impressive.
Other suggestion that you probably know it make it longer.. I pretty sure with those two changes you could get a really good score :)
Stick fight are long past theyr "golden age" I gave it a 2 just because it was decently done.It has to be something really extraordinary to go above 3 or 4 like a good story , humor or really badass animation and art.
i loved it i think you could become great but try to make it longer ok
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