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Needs better voicing
Score: 8 / 10
Summary: Needs better voicing
Review: Honestly, this has great potential, but a lot of the feel is ruined by the horrible voice acting. The quality isn't too bad, but the voices just don't fit in at all, and it really seems like some try way too hard to distort their voice to fit the characters.
Animations and graphics are great. Graphics are pixelated, 8-bit, which is supposed to be, and the animations are smooth, well done.
Story is pretty good, it's one of the better I've seen. It's not overdone, but it's pretty much just right. Not the most exciting or thrilling episode, but it's still pretty good. The humor is okay, nothing made m laught out loud, but some of it was pretty funny. Made me smile, at least.
Lastly, the music in the background is great. The voicing needs, as I said, a lot of work. And honestly, you shouldn't animate a mouth on characters that don't have mouths. It just looks wrong and out-of-place.
To make it better, try to make a better quality voice crew, better voices and better quality. Good luck!
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nat as good
Honestly, I didn't think it was as good as the first one. It would have been better if stuff was going on in the background,like in the first one. The music during the credits was cool, but the text for when Kirby was speaking went by too fast.
Still, pretty decent.
Wow. I actually put the random background actions in because I wanted the first one to make a bit...more interesting because the rest was over all boring.
Well,the stuff Kirby says is not that important so I just made it fast.
Might think about doing some more background animation next time.
this was totally better than the fisrt,u really need this 5/10 ;)
also,for me u got it the 3rd place :D
Thanks ! Ireally appreciate that youlike it that much . :D
alright i though it was good.
the voice acting is what makes it funny.Also the sprite work.I like that more.heheh i cant belive that Rina-chan actually did this lol.Well if you making a part 3 go for it.lol.
It makes me want to do some voiceing too...but..i dont no if i can do a good voice...
Well,there will be some auditions in around a week, prepare to check out my next front page post then .
my god that´s hillarious
i really like it, you need to make more, the voice actings were good, the new kirby sprites are awesome and it´s not mila-chan, it´s rina-chan, seriously make more of it k and congratulations for the daily 5th place
Yeah,thanks for the review,but there are both,Mila-chan and Rina-chan in there. Mila acted as Ike and Rina acted Rocky.
Ninja Action (2003-2012)
NINE TAILS BABY!!
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