Ladies Night! (All Day Long)
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Alice and Wanda are having a slumber party! Robert and Kevin want in on this.
Behold the love square! This gets pretty fucked up. It's pretty much like..
Alice loves Robert, who loves Wanda, Who loves Kevin, who loves Alice. Lets see what happens with this sit-yoo-ay-shun.
Anyways.. Enjoy this thing. I'll see about another cartoon in the fall (As this seems to be a seasonal thing).
BUT ALSO! Like this cartoon? Check out the others, "Three Internet Friends", "Canucks over Christmas" and "Huey Lewis is in the News" on NG, or at the offical Four Days website (which is also chock full of webcomics) at http://fourdays.comicgene sis.com
-Thomas Henriksson
it had its funny parts
like the last guy said, it DOES have potential at parts i laughed but it also confused me in someparts and after a while got boring. people like to watch short funny videos so if u make a long one make sure its EXTRA funny so it keeps them interested.
Other than that good job!
~Kyle~
It has potential.
Well, enjoyable indeed, yet not that good. If you develope the story a little more you may get a good series. Animation migth be a pain in the hands but with practice you will be faster and better.
booooooooooooooooooooooring
i can only watch 1 minute or ill kill my self
Good stuff!
Dude that was great.
The animation wasn't to appealing, but the humor was definitely there.
Oh look, I am writing an actual review!!!11eleven
Well first of all, the animation seems abit...lazy? When I look at the characters I am kinda under the impression that the animator is one lazy bastard (no offense :D). It was good, considering the flow and it created a well received cartoony atmosphere, easy on the eyes and all in all enjoyable to watch.
I do have a more serious issue with the voice acting part, the voices were relatively good, but the actors should get better mics. This is more important than you think, a good example of well sounding voice acting was Robert.
Writing. The plot itself seemed cliche...the whole love square thing, though a German exchange student was a nice touch (the more popular are Russian and Swedish, but I think you can go even more original than German...something like Jordanian maybe? or Latvian). Humor was good, though sometimes supressed by awkward and seemingly unneeded moments. You automatically get a 5/5 for the Yogi Bear refferance, but in a detailed review, this was more of a 7...barely.
Overall: Pretty darn good, enjoyable and I wouldn't mind watching other cartoons from this series. I'm guessing the voice actors are your friends, so tell them to save a few dollars for decent microphones...but if they aren't your friends and can't get new mics, then I suggest getting new voice actors. You'd be surprised how much talented actors (with decent mics) are waiting for a chance like this (inclueding myself).
Take care, pick up on your skills and good luck.
(Holy crap, I think I just wrote a real review)
Haha, don't worry, i would have gotten around to replying eventually!
Hmm.. Well first of all, the lazy part.. Ok, I'll admit the animation COULD be a lot better, but you've gotta take into consideration how long it takes to go back and fill in the colours after drawing these guys. Because i do it frame-by-frame instead of tweening, it just takes forever to animate sometimes!
Oh well, as long as the animation gets by.
Ha, yes. The plot was pretty cliche, i know. I figured i'd take that classic plot and twist it up a bit with my own writing and see how it turns out.
Hmm.. The voice acting. I might try to tone down some of the 'muffled' sounding bits on my lines, and i might get wanda's VA to tone down the accent.
Subtitles will be in the next cartoon.
Thanks for the review though, much appreciated!
-Thomas Henriksson