Good

I thoght it was pretty good. I, for one, could here both the music and the voices clearly, except at the one part when the guy yelled "ian!" i couldn't heaqr that so well. Also, it was a bit short but other then that it was pretty good. And Twisstamation the scene you were talking about is supposed to be the tv. Anyway, Overall, I liked it.

I see...

~ Animation/Graphics ~

Not a bad style at all. Just really not the best style either. I think what would have made this easier on the eyes would be the use of more color and the organization of the text/menus. The places where you used text just seemed sloppy and I didn't like the fact that you used different font for words every now and then. I also think that the introduction to more color, especially in the introduction, would have made this better. Animation itself was actually very smooth and no complaints there at all.

~ Story/Content ~

I just don't see where this submission is suppose to be going. There isn't any humor, it's not a sad submission, there isn't any acting, there isn't any drama, etc.. I guess it's just really hard to tell what's going on in this submission. I could see where there was suppose to be some humor in places like the TV and the generic Anime part, but it just didn't make sense to me. Wasn't even really funny in a random kind of way. The two minute part was way to drawn out even if you were trying to make it drawn out on purpose. Cut it down by about ten seconds and that might be a bit better.

~ Audio ~

The voice acting wasn't very good. The voices themselves might be alright, but the quality was poor enough that I actually didn't hear a single word that was said throughout the entire thing. Also, because I had to turn the volume up for the voices the loud music that you used in the intro and 2 minute part were extremely loud. I think you need to turn that music down a bit, turn the voices up a bit, and try to get better quality voices. The voices also added to why I didn't understand what was going on.

~ Overall ~

The biggest faults of this submission was the lack of content/story and the poor audio. The introduction of more color might make this a bit better also.

eh...

The animation was okay, but there was a scene that we could see your editing software in the background. Also the 2 mins later scene took forever to pass, it almost actually took two mins... Also your sound quality was horrible, and i didn't really get the point of the video. You should take this advice and redo this video, and it will turn out a lot better.

TV Tuning

the bit that says 2 mins later was to long i didnt really like the artwork or the voice acting and it was rather short :\