feedback

Animation: I will give you some credit, that while it not very over the top, it works because of the shortness of the film.

Audio: Needs to be cleaner, but the character voices were ok.

Suggestive: no.

Suggestions: Keep it up, more work = practice.

Lol

I like the plot lol

That is soooo true.

Not very well drawn, but the joke is funny as Hell, so you get brownie points on that from me. Good voice acting too.

Cute

It might not have been the best animation, but I found it cute. It had a certain charm to it :3

Horribly out of sync.

The dialogue didn't match up with the animation at all. Don't put it all on one audio track, have each sentence play at the proper time.

Besides that, it wasn't very funny.

The animation itself was passable, but it could benefit from some smoother motion.