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This appears to be my first completely original, well thought out, and actually animated animation.
OH, RIGHT. Enjoy! :D
(DON'T JUST SIT THERE AND WATCH. YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO INTERACT.)
Funny but its to short.
You should make more interactive options, such as ramming your cursor into his kneecap or stomach instead of just in the back of his head.
Great idea. Needs more interaction.
This is a really good idea! I could imagine a whole story like this!
One thing you do need to work on is length and animation quality. If this was a bit longer, it would be awesome! You could also work on more ways to interact, and it would be a blast!
Overall, you're on the right track. Keep pushing yourself!
4 outta' 5 and 7 outta' 10!
The concept of this flash is good enough. Hover your mouse over the subject to continue. I REALLY enjoyed the sound effects. So those two factors bumped up my rating a lot. One thing you could do is add more moments when you interact, I thought it was a bit short. I would appreciate more sophisticated animations (didn't enjoy watching him fall down). I didn't care that much about the graphics though. So, if you could improve on those two bad factors I mentioned, this would be awesome.
Well if you add more too it,
this would be really fun than.
Still it is pretty good right now,
Hope your flash is saved.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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