has potential
everything was fine but it was a bit plain. It lacked sound effects and background music to set a tone.
Author Comments
This is the second of a twenty scene RPG parody, where Eon tries to pull a bunch of unlikely characters into a lethal force to aid her on her quest for revenge against the Crimson Beak.
Try harder next time
Poor voice acting, static images, and no real story.
I like you're style.
I like the style you use for the movie, but you got to put a little animation in it, not only drawings, just a few little animations would be enough to make it more interesting. A moving background for example. or moving hair, blinking eyes, etc.