Score: 5
"technical problems"
date: June 13, 2009
I don't know why, but there were issues with the comic:
Was there supposed to be text, in lieu of sound, since others noted this lacked sound? There was also a major issue in getting the animations to move from one square to the other, and I had to right click my way through, because on the first screen, nothing happened, then after I got to the next screen, I pressed Enter, and it took me back to the title page, so I had to right click and hit either forward or play in the menu. I liked the style, and think this belongs in the movie section, not the games section, as nice as this is. It's rather like A Bid For Freedom, only without sound. You need to fine-tune the code and cues so that this plays better, and maybe add a feature, telling the viewer to press Enter or click to advance.
I love this format for comics, though, so I encourage you to rework this, and let me know when you get it working well, so I can give a higher vote. For now, you get a 2~3/5, I'm not sure yet. The problems really detract from enjoying your really cool work.
