Thanks for watching my trailer i hope you enjoy it. This is a trailer for my upcoming moive Geo Space. Oh if anyone knows who made the music i will credit or delete because i have no idear who made the music.
Note***
There will be a story in the full video the video is about 20% complet and well be on newgrounds ONLY...
Youtube***
Yes you can put it on youtube (i dont know why you would want to) as long as i has a link the new newgrounds version.
Cool
I don't know exactly what it will be about, but that's half the fun, right? I want to see this when the finished product comes out. Lookin' forward to it! Decent job on animation, also. Nothing too flashy, but the plot looks like it will make up for that, so no worries.
thanks for the comment... yes the best part is waiting for it.
Overall: Okay
Pros:
- Drawing skills good
- Color scheme appropriate
- Music is exciting
Cons:
- Plot looks like a common one
- Uncanny resemblance to "The Karnage Incident": another flash found on this site
Comment:
If you haven't seen "The Karnage Incident"(1) I'd suggest looking it up to avoid getting to close to it in your plot
1) Yes it's spelled "Karnage"
oh dam looks like it everyway.... dude ill have to change it. thanks for letting me know. My mate showed me that along time ago.
lookin great
Drawings are great and so is the animmation especially the gunfire! (nice touch)
The one thing is to make the movement of the limbs a bit smoother. Like when he is raising his arm and it shifts angles it was kinda choppy. Also, I think that trailers are supposed to be submitted to a special section of newgrounds just for demos and trailers. (not completely sure though) anyways I look forward to it and keep up the good work.
Art-10/10
Animation-8/10
Sounds and music-10/10
Overall- 9/10
Thank you :D