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The Line Of Doom

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well, the line vaguely forms the feelings i had this week

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Alright

It was well animated but being such a short loop it could of used a bit more graphic assistance. I dunno, a shinny background, maybe some colours, or something to keep people interested during the loop.
Also having a better finish, say the line goes off the side so it loops smoother would be nice as well.
Over all, nice. Or maybe alright. What ever moderate adjective you find suitable.

Ha ha!

~Pros~
Mildly funny
Made me chuckle
Sorta unique

~Cons~
Short
Obviously could have been made longer
No sound

~My Review~
This is a chuckle.Especially because of the face and 'LOL' it shows.The heart takes away from the topic,but this is mildly funny.

bad

.:ups:.
kinda funny

.:downs:.
didn't have an ending
didn't have a plot
didn't have sound
didn't have color
and the animation wasn't that smooth

.:what i have to say about this:.
this wasn't the worst thing that i have ever seen, but it isn't to great. things like this usually make it because they follow what was listed above. if you ate to do something like this again, make sure you follow what is listed above.

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3,161
Votes
4
Score
2.81 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 24, 2009
11:57 PM EDT