Score: 7
"Not bad."
date: June 11, 2009
~ Animation/Graphics ~
I noticed that a lot of the pictures/text were of poor quality. Some might have been a little hard to read for some people too. Very minor problem and I don't know much about uploading pictures into flash so I don't know if it's possible to make the quality of the pictures better or not, but if there is a way I would recommend it.
~ Story/Content ~
A lot of funny errors, but I noticed that the submission got a little dry after awhile. Could it be possible that you had too many things here? Maybe that's just my opinion, but I never review a submission without watching/playing the whole thing and this one seemed to get old kind of fast.
~ Audio ~
Error sounds were well synced and the rest of the sound effects were perfectly fine. Nothing to critique here.
~ Overall ~
I think I've seen this done so many time and in so many ways that it eventually gets dry/boring after awhile. I might actually recommend making there be less errors so it's not so lengthy, but it's up to the viewers on how much they want to read I guess. Overall not too bad.
~ Review Request Club ~
June 12, 2009
Author's Response:
I see your point, I might try to have the errors use variating layouts and such, I believe that would make it less repetitive.