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Evolution of Flowers
May 10, 2009 –August 17, 2021
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
This is my first real flash. I've done some tests before, but never like this. It's a frame by frame animation, having approximately 20 seconds of play-time. So, I hope you enjoy.
Reviews
Really is a 5 out of ten
but some people voted less so i addz the votes for em :D
<deleted> responds:
Gee, thanks?
good idea
but poor frame quality. it was a good conecpt with this flash though, like, the flowers, but if u were more vibrant, maybe perhaps at least put color in that woulda made this flash better
<deleted> responds:
Yeah. I would have just irritated myself over putting color in frame-by-frame, but I should have taken a little bit more time on this.
Meh.
Eh, it wasn't anything spectacular. I woulda liked to see some sort of conclusion instead of the random cut off/loop. Nice song though!
<deleted> responds:
Yeah, I'm not very good at this, so I'm glad it passed. I'll probably work on it a bit more and maybe re-submit it in the future, if I get the chance.
Hmmm...
You might want to rethink your title. It's not so much evolution as it is the life of different flowers. Your animation was sloppy, but not bad. colors would be nice to see in this. A longer flash with more depth to the "story" would be nice, too. OK work, despite my critisism. 2/5, 4/10.
<deleted> responds:
No, you're right. It could have been a lot nicer, with a higher frame rate, and things not happening so quickly.
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- 2.43 / 5.00