Practice more.
It was nice. The art was good, you can draw very nicely, but you need to improve the animation. Besides that, it was a very nice cartoon. Just practice more.
Author Comments
This is a flash I made just to practice and help increase my skills. There isn't much of a plot because it IS for practice. I'd like reviews so I could know how to make it better.
A cool splash of old school
A little bit of good old "Tom and Jerry" fun. The animation is a little rough and art is crude. But that can be fixed with practice. I have to applaud to you for the frame-by-frame, the acting, anticipation and reaction to other's actions. Bravo!
Toba122 responds:
It looks so ruff because my graphic tablets all jittery and malfunctional. Thanks for the review!
Hehe
I like it!! Your sound effects matched up really well! And you can draw really well also!!! Nice little practice piece! Wish I could animate like that... I mean drawing them frame by frame... thats allot of work!
Haha
Not bad. It was kind of like a Tom and Jerry thing, just with two mice. Good job on this.
Choppy but Fun
The animation was surprisingly fun - especially when the mouse in the blue sweater was jumping about and dodging. However, the very rough background made it difficult to enjoy because I was too busy trying to figure out where they were, and the sense of size was a little off.
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