Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
This is my first real flash i have submitted i worked for ages because i dont have a clue how to use flash or draw characters or anything so this is really my learning animation so please vote fairly
i will reply to everything single one of your reviews so some support or feedback would be greatly appreciated
thank you i hope you like it
P.S. sorry about the huge file size i dont know how to reduce it
P.S.S I KNOW THE VOICE ACTING IS CRAP!!!!!
It was alright
You need to realize a paragraph story line is rediculous. That's like going to the movies and just reading a book. Let the story unfold itself. Less bullet holes too, they were just an eye bothering amount of black dots. Work with tweens a bit more and sooner or later you'll look back at this and laugh.
i laugh at it now trust me this is last years work i just never got round to getting a microphone anf finishing it thanks for the review
Alright I can agree with past reviews on the voices do need some more work and need to be placed better.
On the other side the story line was somthing diffrent for once and that generally gets you kudo points with me.
All in all... 7/10
thanks for the postive review im glad you even liked it just a little
it was mid-good
It was descent.
I found it a bit slow, too many over used scenes, long and over exaggerated movements.
It had a weird battle between the characters that seemed a bit lazy, yeah a lot of bullet holes (unnecessary) but it was dragged out too far and not too exciting.
Voice acting... No comment needed i can understand ^^
-Mr. Figgy Mcfigginstein
thanks im glad you gave constructive critism not like FreedomFridge i will take into account all that you have said on my next one
When I read your description on your flash I thought "Oh great another noob trying to get his flash submitted" but then I watched it and I have to admit it's pretty good. I voted 4/5 just because the animation needed a few tweaks and the sound wasn't as bad as you had said. Anyways I hope to see more from you in the future.
thank you im glad you enjoyed it im still a noob trying to get my submission through though lol thanks man much appreciated
THE VOICES WERE SHIT
i said that!!!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.