Well...
Every one has to start some were. It was alright. not the worst submission ive seen on NG so gratz. And you could work on your animation a little bit. Do you use a mouse or a tablet? I ask because some do better with a tablet.
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devil walks in, guy gives him trouble, devil gets mad. This toke me awhile, mostly cause i was grounded. haha, anway im glad to be finish, but it was fun making it. i hope you like it, and the voices sync up good. I might make this a series. dont know
swishcheese responds:
Thnaks. yeah i use a mouse ive been looking for a tablet though at stores. but i cant seem to find one. anyway thanks for the review
Could use work.
I can agree with the last review that you may want to pack more yelling and some more intresting sounds considering the feet sounded like keyboard typeing.
swishcheese responds:
yeah it was suppose to be a keyboard typing i was trying to put office sounds in the background, but it didnt work out to well. THanks for the review
Your not packing very much heat with this one
It has a decent script, but it is severely hindered by all the visual qualities of this production. I'm not saying that you didn't try; however, this can't be considered by a long shot to pass specs for a final product. This might just pass for a pitch idea to group of close friends, or a very sympathetic audience that doesn't need a whole lot of convincing. Also, I'm gonna have to recommend perhaps getting other people to do voice acting. While this might not display your best work... it certainly displays a vast need for improvement. Vast.
swishcheese responds:
Thanks for the advice and the review
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