Long cat...
IS LONG!
Author Comments
This is a children's book I wrote and illustrated for Grade 12 Writer's Craft. I did all the drawing in Flash, and it got a pretty good reception from the kids I read it to, so I figured I ought to modify it into a flash file as long as I already had the drawings.
Please note that I wrote this with children in mind.
Not all the lines Shock-Dingo narrated fit the text on the pictures, mainly because I sent him a slightly different copy, but I changed a couple things so it would still work out.
EmDubya responds:
But not looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon g?
This is awesome.
And I know the author :D
EmDubya responds:
What? I don't know you! Somebody stop that man!
is that your voice?
it might sound a little ambitious, but i think i could use your voice for a rather larger project.
weird story and poor animation. but it was fun to watch :p
EmDubya responds:
The voice is that of Shock-Dingo. And yes the story is wierd :P The drawings were meant for a book, and not an animation, but I figured I'd post them anyways.
Laying down the Law.
I'll go ahead and split this into 5 categories.
1. Graphics: Terrible. It's like you drew them drunk, or something and kept the same theme throughout the entire "Story." It wasn't pleasing to look at, it was boring as all hell, and even the subtle funny parts were just.. not interesting.
2. Storyline: Worse than the Graphics? Seriously, what was the morale of that? You discover your teachers partying and they suddenly have an Epifany and become good teachers? And you become a good student? What? There's no logic in that, there isn't even childish logic in that. You're confusing the damn things.
3. Voice: Superb. Loved it. The dialouge was attrocious, but the voice was at least decent.
4. Impact: Biggest waste of 8 minutes of my life. The only way I can possibly find this enjoyable is if you presented it to mentally challenged children. And they were drunk. Very, very drunk.
5. Overall: 2/10. That's 20% satisfactory, and that's ONLY because I appreciate the voices. Other than that, it was just a big waste of effort and time. You might as well have been slamming your head against a broken wall in attempts to fix it.
And apply wallpaper.
EmDubya responds:
Well the children liked it. And they weren't even drunk OR mentally challenged.
That art sure looks familliar. Wait a minute...
That certainly was longer than the average flash. And that was a pretty decent voice-over.
EmDubya responds:
Yes, Shock-Dingo sent me a very long but very good narration to set the slideshow to.