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well to be honest i tried, but on madness day i know i could do better!
Expansion is in order, longer, more substance, Good start though!
this movie was laging and not very interesting and short the first part was really useless when you want to make a story never kill the characters not to many ok it was you first flash on ng and 4 the first try it was not so bad make more sounds add more frames and make a story line
yeah i still kinda a noob
no.work a little harder on your flash.more layers.that was a very bad and you need more then 1 layer.you can have 100 layers just be careful how you use them.your not doing ery well with animating and i understand it might be your first time and i havent been on your profile yet but still this is quiet bad and its convinient if you would just go to tutorials like i do.i aint submit a flash at all cause i have to be prepared and so far im doing well because of tutorials.i hope you know the link to tutorial collection cause you need one more then i need one.please do not take this review as a joke cause its really not.i hope you can take critizm.
actually i have 45 layers and 538 frames but thanks for the advice
Interesting Yes, Original No
It has a good direction to it, could of added more to it.
i can tell you tried
i think you need more frames the animation was really jumpy. also make it longer next time with more actual fighting and less talking
yep will do
A short film about a park bench
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