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Portal I : Original

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NOTE:This is just the original, the redone version is "Portal I : Portals". it has all of the scenes in this movie but with around 10 extra scenes to help tell the story because alot of people were lost.

My first animation for my graduation project. I had to learn how to use Flash Macromedia from scratch and come out with something decent in 9 weeks with atleast one period per day to work on it. This is what I came up with. Enjoy =)

NOTE:The gaps in the plotline is part of the plotline... ^_^

FIXED:
-Preloader
-Flashing Sprites
-Missing SPrites
-Slow Intro
-Added 2 Things To Help The Overall Plot
-Added A little More Movement

thanks for your patience
-iBlackie Chan

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second version vs first

there's a few things about this from the second version the change in music from the first was not better but i feel it was more out of place second the backgrounds of the first was much better the. When mario and sonic meet one another the drawing was about the same only slightly better, Music choices were also better in the matter as well the only major differences in the two Is A there is no large lag and doesn't make you lower the quailty of the vidoe that should of been made in the second version and B the second is longer by a few seconds. What should be done is....Drawing should be improved of course....Songs from the first may want to be reused.....And you need to go over what made this one not lag as badly as the other weither or not it was a shorter then this one or not. If you just made a second version of your first then you should of made it to where how the first one meets that with no lag the better choice of music and slightly better drawing not the other way around. At best this gets a 6/10 and a 3 out of 5 reason being cause of choices made and what I've just explained what was wrong from the first to second versions of this same moive or flash. And yes I did like this only improvements needs to be played for success and great reviews and rates

Sucks

Learn to draw

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When you made this, you read my comment i left on "monstrous turtles" didn't you? Because it seems to good to be true that they are both identical.

Same movie?

It has the same parts I saw in the another one?

iBlackieChan responds:

The other movie was this movie version 2, not part 2 =P this movie was missing alot of key points that I decided to add in the other =P im still trying to figure out how to delete this one

it was ok

I really don't get what is supposed to be the storyline. I don't really play sonic or mario games so i'm probably missing something the point

iBlackieChan responds:

I added 2 little things that help the storyline. Im not giving much away about MAIN MAIN storyline at the moment, what I give you is what you get lol. Each part will have a little peice to the MAIN MAIN storyline like why the hell is there a portal in sonics world leading to marios =) and stuffff like that ^_^

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Apr 12, 2009
11:55 PM EDT