ok i think

no preloader. also it really didn't make much sense

Incoherent.

It was very hard to tell what the fuck was going on, as there's no real explanation. The animation is very poor, as there isn't much movement in the characters. The voices also sound like they were made by some one in middle school, and they all sounded the same too. To top it off, there's no preloader. Please implement these improvements in your next flash.

ahahahahaha! thumbs up

nice job

good work

I love your work you show a lot of emagination