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Apr 1, 2009 | 9:40 PM EDT

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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Needs more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this one is just as short as the other one with faces, now, i can understand you are still working at it, but you could put much more effort into these, like some {BACKROUNDS} and if you are going to just have them fight have some differant places they fight jumping off cliffs and have them shoot stuff kinda like yugo or something, now these are just a few ideas, another is the flash itself is too short, maybe if you piy a number of short toons together then maybe, also adding more effort into a story would also be another start, so while this is amusing and short there are alot more things to work on so i hope you do look into improving on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try adding more effort there are a number of things you can do, first of all this one needs some backround or take the sticks into differant backrounds scenes but nneds something more then just the blank backrounds, A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short i would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece, also could use a stop action code for the looping.

~~OVERALL~~
Some sort of stick battle, short and amusing but needs more effort.

~X~


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