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I dont care if this gets blammed, its only here so i could show my mum it because flash was being wierd.
But...I have to be a jerk now and review it.
Art: not horrible, but could be improved quite a bit.
Animation: minimal. Again, work on it.
Sound: none. Believe me, this adds a lot to any movie.
Organization: it was okay.
The cursor: Kind of annoying, actually, even though it fit the theme.
Say hi to your mom for us, and keep working on your animation skills.
I will work on my animation, i want to be really good one day.
Cute, But I'm Not Sure if It Belongs Here
That stick figure must've scratched right down to his brain.
I would've liked to have seen "the main character" do something else too.
The words being the same color of the background was ok in theory, but you could hardly read the words as they went by; consider slowing down the text speed, or make the words a different color.
I'm sure you're mom will love it.
It's gonna get eaten alive on the newgrounds portal.
I know it kinda sucks, but it was a present and not actually put here to be rated.
But I can't say that i enjoyed it to much.
Though I'm sure your mom appreciates it.
she did =D
The only reason i posted it here was because my flash player wasn't working, i dont need it rated.
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