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Mar 22, 2009 | 11:54 AM EDT

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Hover over the big heart for the card, click the small one for the animation.

I dont care if this gets blammed, its only here so i could show my mum it because flash was being wierd.

Reviews


DawnslayerDawnslayer

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars March 22, 2009

Nice gesture

But...I have to be a jerk now and review it.

Art: not horrible, but could be improved quite a bit.
Animation: minimal. Again, work on it.
Sound: none. Believe me, this adds a lot to any movie.
Organization: it was okay.
The cursor: Kind of annoying, actually, even though it fit the theme.

Say hi to your mom for us, and keep working on your animation skills.


TheUndeadNinja responds:

I will work on my animation, i want to be really good one day.


ellebirdy23ellebirdy23

Rated 1 / 5 stars March 22, 2009

Cute, But I'm Not Sure if It Belongs Here

That stick figure must've scratched right down to his brain.
I would've liked to have seen "the main character" do something else too.

The words being the same color of the background was ok in theory, but you could hardly read the words as they went by; consider slowing down the text speed, or make the words a different color.

I'm sure you're mom will love it.
It's gonna get eaten alive on the newgrounds portal.


TheUndeadNinja responds:

I know it kinda sucks, but it was a present and not actually put here to be rated.


Ryanc360Ryanc360

Rated 1 / 5 stars March 22, 2009

That was..

sweet.
But I can't say that i enjoyed it to much.
Though I'm sure your mom appreciates it.


TheUndeadNinja responds:

she did =D

The only reason i posted it here was because my flash player wasn't working, i dont need it rated.