it was a very good vid, a few flaws but not bad, you put music in it and took your time, and it was like not very many flashes i have ever seen i like that

You used krinkels Graphics is is acceptable a common practice. BUT you cant use his animation sequences. I could CLEARLY tell what animated by you and what was decompiled from a Madness animation. One sequence was smoother, but what you animated was VERY choppy. This needs blammed or flagged. You cant be doing this man, think of your own way to animate madness, and NOT use others animation work to your own benifit.

I'm sorry but I'm gonna have to be harsh about this;

Madness movies are hard to get right because they're so simple, they need a lot of work to be made interesting.

Whilst it isn't an ugly flash for the most part, the animation was very lazy and just seemed to be too half-arsed and this is a really big problem when you want people to take it seriously.

The story direction was awful. Everything was way too fast, blank screens saying "30 mins later" could not have been more inappropriate, as it really breaks up the pace and just seems like you're not trying.

I find that skill and forethought comes with practice and I suggest you do so. I sound like a dick, I know but the best crit is the harshest. As a practicing artist and animator, I know this.