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Hey the first episode of "smile for Ranger Doosh" is now out on newgrounds! Huzzah and hurray!
Ranger's brother, Greenburg, gets on American Idol and Chello has an idea to make the gang hideoudiously rich!
Made in the style of Tom goes to the mayor.
Check out tejeti.com for more!
Thanks to Paperbat for all his help!
*EDIT* Big thanks to Tom for the front page! We appreciate it a bunch! *EDIT*
You can check out a video response to some of the comments at
It was very well done but It wasn't funny. I really really wanted it to be. It looked great though. I've actually done some flashes like Tom Goes to the Mayor Myself, haha.
But they did bad, haha, so maybe I'm not the person to listen to
Yeah I recall watching some and I actually liked them...so...yeah
Randy says, "Dawg", by the way. THAT'S what he's known for.
This was well edited, well put together...I guess the TGTTM style can be replicated...but the main character was too much like Tom-- it was hard to divorce your character from that of the work's obvious aesthetic inspiration.
And the comedic timing was a little off-- too long of a pause here, not really too many jokes in general.
But overall, it was cohesive, and for that you deserve some credit.
Tom Goes to the Mayor is great and you blatantly ripped them off, though your version is pathetically sad. My friends an I all love Tim and Eric but we don't emulate what they do. You should be inspired to do something original (like Tom Goes to the Mayor) not make a carbon copy of it. And American Idol sucks. Not funny.
As Bill and Ted would say "EXCELLENT!"
This really felt like something you would see on TV and I hope that it will be someday.
Ok let's get something straight
Tim and Eric of adult swim are not funny and to anyone who thinks that they are, you are demonstrably wrong. Tom goes to se the mayor is the biggest animated abortion that has ever made it on to television. It lacks any sort of humor whatsever. I would also like to add that the animation style is worse than aqua teen hunger force. However unlike aqua teen hunger force Tom goes to see the Mayor has never even made me so much as chuckle.
Ok bearing all that in mind I now turn to you, the author, and I ask what made you think this was a good idea? All of the great ratings that show got on adult swim? I mean sure if there was any place in the world you could post this and have it be liked it would be newgrounds but that doesn't mean you should. It would be like shitting into a pond just because so many people have already, it has indeed become an unlivable shit pond. I mean it'll never get any better if this keeps up.
Anyway, on to an actual review with actual criticism now. Since this was a dead on copy of Tom goes to see the Mayor, pretty much I'm just going to scroll through every mistake they make:
1. Everything about it screams hate me. Low animation quality coupled with bad writing and horrible voice acting is not a way to keep an audience coming back
2. Farting and cover things in shit is not funny. It's not even because it's immature (immature though it is), it's just not funny to anyone except perhaps a leprous retard (most of newgrounds then).
3. Now I know I mentioned the animation in the first one but this one is for you the author speciffically. The edges were rough and (and I can't believe I'm saying this) it was actually worse than the original.
Inconclusion make this the last episode. Or at least make the nexxt one less awful by immitating a show that was funny to begin with.
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