good clay!

found it very interesting and you had a great sense of claymation, its not start n stop broken camcorder for a knox knock-off! cos thats good!
keep it up!

its kl...

but i dunt think ng is the place for claymation. youtube maybe?

Good but..

You need to sort your voice recordings out, there is a lot of background interference and it ruins it egardless of how good the voice acting or the dialogue is.

Some of the movements seem a little rusty too.

Other than that a good submission.