oe Episode 1: TT
Tha was cool,, I like the facial expressions, and the music that came in on the end.
Author Comments
Hey everyone, this is my first finished flash. I know its not very good but i like to animate and i need your help giving me good constructive feedback.
This took me 1 day, 346 frames, 5 layers and one more secret ingredient you will find out in the credits.
Thanks and enjoy the movie. Oh and if you dont like toilet jokes then just dont view and move on.
P.S. If this movie is found anywhere else than Newgrounds its stolen.
Lordsalem responds:
Hey thanks alot man! I really appreciate your review and support hopefully you will follow the series and yes a big hand out to Deathkllr84 for the music.
Good
quite good, I thought you could do a bit better with with the exploding stomach but it's good for a first animation, it would be good if his head popped off instead.
Lordsalem responds:
Thanks for the review, it has encouraged me and i hope you will be a fan of the series of Joe, and thanks for that idea that would have been pretty sweet :D and then if the poo still came out :D... man im twisted, but thank you very much and ill use that idea in the next episode as a bonus :).
For your first...
I'd barely call this animation. All you did was change the color of his face, and then throw some red out of toilet. Didn't even use your own sounds. Next time actually try something Origonal, and Something that actually shows us something. Anything. Personally, I don't enjoy watching one shot of a guy on the toilet where nothing happens.
I'm not trying to be mean, it's just...Well, exactly what I said.
Lordsalem responds:
I understand, thanks for the review. Your review is much respected and appreciated by me. In episode 2 im going to do some real animation. This episode was to work with colour changing so yes it is kind of a animation due to trying not to make the colours jumpy and making the face turn smoothly. And as for the sounds do you really want to hear me taking a poo?
