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Hi im verry verry sorry for the long delay i had loads of school exams that i had to revise for
this movie had loads of problems that i had to deal with but i have made some go but there are still some remaining that i cant fix eg. when shadow is recovering there is a red box that appers
Apert from that the movie is perfect my credits are rushed
But ep5 is going to be way too cool for school
Can someone plz email me the web site were i can get energy wave sprites from it will be verry greatfull
well, its very nice! but needs some original sprites. perhaps, drawing the sprites by your pc, and importing them in dis?
OTHER THAN THAT, IT'S G00D 555
Dude, I'm sorry, but it was painful
I can understand the corruptions and the fact that you were busy with school and everything, that's why I didn't comment earlier (being busy with school). anyway, the spelling errors have come back and are at full force, and the fights seem too rushed, Shadow owning everyone at the tournament was okay, (and the box seemed to add a tiny bit more of cool to the attack) but the robot and Chaos battles should have been a little longer, the music quality was better this time, but the electricity sound was overused, maybe you should have spent a little more time with finding more diverse sounds, the vortexes weren't as good this time, (mostly the first one), so try using old sprites, like the ones from the first episode, the energy attacks were horrible, they shouldn't have the shadowy effect, and try making them more spiky, not a perfect ball, (now onto the good) I liked the idea of a guest star for one episode,(however, I think he should have had more to do with the story, not just rescue Sonic), along with Chaos having a cool black form, you've done very well with cutting back on the "what the hell" over usage, and the 'da' instead of 'the' probems, and the good choice of music has increased, but overall, this was about half of what I was expecting from you, try harder, and figure out what caused the corruptions, and try to fix them. If you can fix these problems, you will have yourself a big fan : ) P.S. Don't listen to those other guys, your series is still pretty good, but please don't follow the cliche and go to DBZ sounds and characters, your series has a sense of originality that I like.
jeez, where to start... Your use of MS Paint and microsoft office tools is painfully, agonizingly obvious, your sound sounds like, well, crap, your grammar was full of errors, and your use of sprites was not very good, to put it nicley. All in all, getting sentenced to waterboarding at the dentist's office while I watched my girlfriend cheat on me and throw away all my belongings would be a more pleasurable experience than to watch this again. I'm sorry.
A worthy effort, but.... Well, for starters... it's called GRAMMAR. Use it. Next, the sound... a lot of room for improvement. And the graphics. Sprites are cool, but the other things like the balls of energy weren't sprite-ish, and that kills it. If you spent more time on this, it could be a lot better.
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